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NJ Fiction's avatar

I could 100% see this unfolding. Brutal

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Other than the girl dying- it did happen. The fear on her face is a core memory I can not forget.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

I believe it I read your note I just meant your description was very good. I’m glad she survived though that is so scary

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Whiskey, Blood and Dust's avatar

Raw and visceral. It hits like true horror should - emotions you can't shake, images you can't get out of your head. There's honestly little need to invent supernatural beings to scare people, but there's nothing more horrible than what people do to one another. It's all the more terrifying because it did (or could) happen.

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thank you!

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WS Ribelin's avatar

That was terrible. :(

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Yeah. 😔

Thanks for reading!!

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WS Ribelin's avatar

Of course! :)

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thanks!

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