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EJ Trask's avatar

this is so fierce and terrifying and great. your description of the moment he comes in the room with the heat and the flies was one of the scariest things i’ve read in a while. I can’t tell

you how much I loved reading this.

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thank you!

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Renni Grier's avatar

*banging the table* the rhythm of your prose the scene at the church it sucked me in--i knew what the reveal would be but i still couldn't turn away your words are magnetic and this is entrancing.

the written word can do so much

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thank you!!!

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Personal aid called Karen was too funny

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thanks. I thought it was spot on in a way that tickled me 😆

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Jared Lambert's avatar

Thank you!!!

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